I was one of the people who agreed with you in your last elevator pitch! If and when your product becomes available, I would buy in bulk! The opportunity you discovered is such a good one and I think it would have a positive influence on everyone- making people see that they need to wash their hands, and making sure they don't have any excuses not to!
Heya Sici, I was also one of the people who've been expressing a great and mighty need for your product (does it have a name yet?)!!! It was cool to see you so confident in this elevator pitch, because yeah, you should be. I don't really have much critique, but a suggestion for the next pitch would be for you to go into more detail with your hand soap and its differentiating qualities from possible alternatives.
Great idea! You seem really confident in your product and in your ability to sell it. A couple suggestions; the first being that if you already have a name for your product, use it in the video. People are far more likely to remember your idea if the name is repeated several times. Two, your product is all about hands, don't be afraid to use yours when you speak! You idea is good an you know it, so adding a smattering of gestures would go a long way to communicating your enthusiasm for this product.
I was one of the people who agreed with you in your last elevator pitch! If and when your product becomes available, I would buy in bulk! The opportunity you discovered is such a good one and I think it would have a positive influence on everyone- making people see that they need to wash their hands, and making sure they don't have any excuses not to!
ReplyDeleteHeya Sici, I was also one of the people who've been expressing a great and mighty need for your product (does it have a name yet?)!!! It was cool to see you so confident in this elevator pitch, because yeah, you should be. I don't really have much critique, but a suggestion for the next pitch would be for you to go into more detail with your hand soap and its differentiating qualities from possible alternatives.
ReplyDeleteGreat idea! You seem really confident in your product and in your ability to sell it. A couple suggestions; the first being that if you already have a name for your product, use it in the video. People are far more likely to remember your idea if the name is repeated several times. Two, your product is all about hands, don't be afraid to use yours when you speak! You idea is good an you know it, so adding a smattering of gestures would go a long way to communicating your enthusiasm for this product.
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